Mental Racetrack
Going Faster Going Faster
Rhythmic Rhythmic
Like a heartbeat
Perhaps a train
NO FOCUS
Flit from one to the next
Staring Staring
Uncomprehending
Listening intently.
But no hearing
Change of pattern
Can't be done
Track, track, fast track
Speeding
Blurred and Blank.
Rhyme and Reason
out the door
or different?
No sense
Nonsense
CHAOS
Slow
Why can't
Stop.
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Ah... a quick poem I wrote... reflecting my mental state. It's just a rough draft, really, but I don't think I'm going to be improving on it anytime soon, so I figured I'd put it up here.
It's the first piece of literature I've posted... so I hope I did it right. Eheheh... And I have no idea what category to put it in... I'm not learned in the ways of poetry classification. I'mma just go look up definitions on wikipedia or something. |
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"Sans toi, les émotions d'aujourd'hui ne seraient que la peau morte des émotions d'autrefois."
Super angsty hero of supreme megness, as dubbed by German antichrist jesuit cannibal god!
I really don't have much stock in my poetry skills, actually. ^.^;
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"Sans toi, les émotions d'aujourd'hui ne seraient que la peau morte des émotions d'autrefois."
Super angsty hero of supreme megness, as dubbed by German antichrist jesuit cannibal god!
Great write
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mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
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I really like it.
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I'm glad you noticed that... that was like, the thing I was trying to focus on. ^^
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And I will. It's good to know that my poetry isn't crap.
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